Writer Cartoons: 3rd person problems

3rd person

3rd person problems

I was reading this book and there were three characters – the author, Benny and Crissa. The last two characters were inside the author’s head. So the author had to speak for them which didn’t seem fair.

“…hey, they’re aways speaking for me! It’s that 3rd person again…”

One should have known!

 

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Chatting clouds gather above the cows

cows

What's in the news? Don't know given up reading the labels!

Cows chat in the field, as the rain clouds gather around….

before it was eat all you want

then it was don’t move around too much

and now it’s just meds for this and meds for that no one asked, hey cow? how are you feeling today!

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